Sight of Resplendence Feedback
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An attempt of this piece was to create multiple voices weaving between each other, how well was this done?
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I can hear them whispering to me...
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Describe the two voices in character, which is gentle, which is cold, old, warm, etc?
Did anything really help discern them? Or what discerned them most?
Were the long dashes in “When the stars’, winds— strike the summit of the world— energy, me” and the short dash at “a new glow-a new color” clunky/confusing? Or, how did you read them?
    What meaning could you pull from the poem?
Any other comments? Feelings or images while reading?
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