Things a BETA reader looks for
Protagonist(s)
Likeable? Actions consistent with motivations? Motivations logical?
Antagonist
Appropriate level of menacing? Actions consistent with motivations? Motivations logical? Was the identity a surprise?
Secondaries
Do they advance the plot? Do they steal the show?
General Character Questions
Who was your favorite and why? Who was your least favorite and why? Could any characters be combined or deleted?
Plot
Hook
Did it come fast enough? Did it capture your interest?
True Beginning
Did the story start at the right place? Did it start with the right person? Was there too much or too little backstory?
Pacing
Are the actions fast-paced? Are the expositions slower? Is there a proper ratio between the two, or is it heavy on action or description? For every scene (proactive: goal, conflict, disaster) is there an appropriate sequel (responsive: reaction, dilemma, decision)? Is there any place you found yourself skimming out of boredom? Is there any place you wished to slow down for more clarity?
Logic
Actions consistent with motivations? Motivations logical? Are there any loose ends?
Setting
Is the story’s era established early enough? Is the locale made clear? Is the reader grounded in each scene, or are some unexplored (white room syndrome)?
Voice
Characters
Does each character have a distinct voice? Does anyone say or think something out of character at any point? Is the dialogue at any point unclear or unrealistic?
Deep POV
Are there any cases of author intrusion, or does every scene stay in the POV character’s head? Is there any head-hopping?
Emotional Response
Does any situation stand out as particularly: Funny, Sad, Pulse-Racing, How did you feel after you finished the book? Did you at any part feel like your reaction didn’t match the author’s intention? If so, when?
Mechanics
Any serious problems with: typos, misspellings, grammatical errors, punctuation