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Reader Feedback - I appreciate your opinions. Thank you for taking the time for this survey! The first 15 questions are from the book How to write Pulp Fiction.
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#HTWPF_1 Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?
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#2 Did you get oriented fairly quickly at the beginning as to whose story it is, and where and when it’s taking place? If not, why not?
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#3 Could you relate to the main character?
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#4 Did the setting interest you and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?
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#5 Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?
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#6 Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?
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#7 Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details?
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#8 Were the characters believable? Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable?
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#9 Did you get confused about who’s who in the characters? Were there too many characters to keep track of? Too few? Are any of the names of characters too similar?
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#10 Did the dialogue keep your interest and sound natural to you? If not, whose dialogue did you think sounded artificial or not like that person/AI would speak?
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#11 Did you feel there was too much description or exposition? Not enough? Maybe too much dialogue in parts?
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#12 Was there enough conflict, tension, and intrigue to keep your interest?
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#13 Was the ending satisfying? Believable?
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#14 Did you notice any obvious, repeating grammatical, spelling, punctuation or capitalization errors? Examples?
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#15 Do you think the writing style suits the genre? If not, why not?
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#16 Did you skip or skim parts? Which?
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#17 What aspects of the story should be more pronounced? (Free Running, Martial Arts, Crafting, Gaming Stuff, Flora's opinions and emotions ... )
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#18 What aspects of the story should be LESS pronounced? (Free Running, Martial Arts, Crafting, Gaming Stuff, Flora's opinions and emotions ... )
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#19 Did you skim or skip anything? (Fights, Crafting, Stat Tables ... )
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