First Page Critique

Welcome to First Page Critique

Semi-Sages of the Pages seeks to make everyone's writing "even better" and we hope to provide constructive feedback that will take all our writing to the next level. Submitting your work below denotes that you are entering for a chance to receive either pre-recorded or live feedback from the Semi-sages of the Pages.

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First pages will be chosen at random. The Semi-Sages aspire to read all submissions if they are appropriate. *
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The Semi-Sages require that all participants be kind and respectful to themselves and their fellow writers. Constructive criticism is encouraged and should be focused on making the writing better. Any mean-spirited or unkind personal attacks in the comments will not be tolerated. *
Name or pen name.   *
It is the Semi-sages intent to keep all selections anonymous. However as the author, I maintain the rights to work, and therefore the rights of disclosure. I also understand that human error happens and will forgive any accidental reveal. *
Genre  *
What is the title of your work? *
Submit the first page of your work between 250 and 300 words here:  *
I certify that I maintain all rights legally and ethically to the page share.   *
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In submitting this page, I agree to allow my work to be shared in public. I acknowledge that this might come with some unforeseen risks and in the worst case situation possibly even plagiarism. While none of the Semi-sages have ever heard of this happening, in the unlikely event that this or any other unforeseen problem arises, during the reading of this page, I will NOT hold the Semi-sages legally or ethically accountable.
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