First, thank you for trusting me with your work!
What I'm offering:
*A partial manuscript critique (1-2 scenes, no sex scenes please. I also don't enjoy excessive swearing.)
*Feedback on punctuation, grammar, and flow (Are there dangling participles? What about head-hopping? Do the character's emotions give me a sense of them? Am I confused by their actions?
*Honest but fair feedback. I won't bash your work, but I won't be going easy on you. Nor will I point out every single proofreading error.
What I'm asking:
*Permission to share the scenes and my critique on my YouTube channel (JHouserWrites). I'd obviously appreciate follows and shares as I'd love to hit the 1k sub amount to be able to monetize the channel to help supplement book sales, but it's not required.
*Basic information about your work before I agree to critique it (I can't guarantee I'll take on every critique request, or give a timeframe as to when I'll have it done.)
Once you've filled this out, please drop me a line on social media or at my email address JHouserWrites@gmail.com so I know you've submitted a request to be on my radar.
*It's probably best to add this email address to your address book as my emails unfortunately sometimes find themselves in other people's spam folders.
**Please don't send the manuscript over until I ask for it.
~J. Houser (Jen)