Please provide feedback based around the
mechanics of the demo-in-progress that you have just played. This feedback should be restricted solely to the mechanics and systems of the game and the presentation thereof; all art, graphics, sprites, etc., are placeholder and will be changed in the future, as well as all sound/lack thereof. Basically, feedback like "The graphics are really ugly" or "Why is there no sound" is neither helpful nor desired; on the other hand, comments such as "I felt like abc mechanic could have been explained better" or "I wish I had a better idea of what xyz was/did" are more of what I am looking for at this time. Thank you :)
P.S. Regardless of your personal relationship to me, please be as objective as possible, and do your best to refrain from taking my personal feelings into account. There is no need to be overly kind or harsh on my behalf, as I am strictly looking for honest and objective feedback. Thank you again :)