BPHS Candidate's Persuasive Paragraph
In order to maintain transparency in our application process, BPHS candidates submit a paragraph detailing why s/he should be accepted to matriculate at BPHS. This is your opportunity to be matched to our screened  program so be certain to showcase your best work. This is worth 10% of the admission criteria.
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The Assignment
In a paragraph of 200-250 words, write a persuasive paragraph responding to the prompt below:
PROMPT: Explain why you wish to be considered for admission to BPHS
GUIDELINES:
In your paragraph be sure to:
*Establish a precise and credible position that responds appropriately to the prompt
*Explain your position with claims, reasons, and evidence from your personal life and your educational goals, as well as what you know about BPHS
*Include a conclusion that supports your position
*Use language and tone appropriate to the admissions committee
*Demonstrate a command of standard English conventions
You may also consider the TIED paragraph protocols and follow this general format:

T= Topic Sentences/Transition
I= Introduce Evidence/Reason
E= Evidence/Reason
D= Discuss

ANSWER THE PROMPT:Explain why you wish to be considered for admission to BPHS *
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