Murder in Heliopolis by Hyba - Alpha Reader Feedback Form
If you're reading this, you're probably either interested in being an alpha reader for Murder in Heliopolis, or you already are and you want to send me some feedback! Welcome, welcome, and a huge thank you for your interest and support!

You can fill out this form as many times as you like. You can fill it out once, after reading part of the story or the entire thing, or you can fill it out at the end of each chapter, or at the end of each reading session -- you get the gist! 

So, don't feel like you need to read the whole thing in order to give me feedback. I'm happy getting your feedback even if you've only read one scene, one chapter, did not complete the story - whatever the case!

Thank you again, and I hope you will consider applying to be a beta reader when the time comes for that stage!

(I collect emails so that I can reach out to you later on to ask you if you would be interested in beta reading. I want to give my alpha readers first dibs!)
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How far have you gotten in reading the first draft?
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Do you plan on continuing, or did you decide it wasn't for you? *
What are your thoughts on the characters in the story so far? Who are your favourites? Your least favourites?
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What are your thoughts on the settings and worldbuilding of the story so far?
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With regards to the plot, what did you think of the storyline? Did it make sense? Are there any plot holes, or plot twists that didn't seem to belong? [The ending will be dealt with in the next question.]
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Readers have found the ending to be rather abrupt. Do you agree? Apart from that, do you have any other feedback to share with regards to the ending?
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