College Essay Review Request 2023-2024
Please fill out the form below if you would like your college essay(s) to be reviewed by the Lynbrook College & Career Advisors, Mrs. Bagade and Mrs. Tang. Only students (no parents) may submit an essay for review.  

We will make corrections and suggestions based on everything we know about how college admission officers read essays. We will be frank with you. If we think that your topic, however sincere, is too cliché or overused, we will suggest that you find a more original topic.

We are using Google docs for this purpose. If you are using another word editor to write your essays, please copy and paste your essay to a Google doc before submitting your request. We will make suggestions and comments directly in your Google doc. Please give us editing rights and a clean copy without comments from other reviewers.

Please DO NOT revise your essay (or ask others to review it) while we are reviewing it. Let us work on the most recent version, which you can continue to revise after we return it to you. We will do our best to complete our review within three to five days of submission. Essays are read in the order received.

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Email *
First Name (Include legal and nickname, if applicable) *
Last Name *
Lynbrook Student ID *
Please let us know the category of today's submission. We ask that you limit your submissions to a maximum of four, yes we said 4!, per day and that you submit them together on one doc. *
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Please give us a list of three colleges to which you will be submitting this essay. Or if this essay is for one specific college or system, please specify. This helps us understand the context of the essay. *
Major(s) you are considering *
Please include on your doc the essay prompt you are responding to, the current word count, and the word count limit. Example: Why Georgia Tech? WC: 211/250. *
To ensure that our feedback is relevant, we request that you refrain from redrafting these essays on a different doc while we are in the process of reviewing them.
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If this essay was previously reviewed by us, which Advisor gave the feedback? We will try to have the same person do the follow-up review. *
Insert the link to your Google doc.  Please grant us EDIT access (not just "suggest" access) so that we may leave comments/suggestions). If we go to read your essay and you have not granted us edit access, your review request will be moved to the end of the queue. *
Note: Do not reply/respond to the comments/suggestions we leave in the document as we will not always see them.  Come in to talk with us if you have questions. *
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