Hello! Thanks for playtesting
Motes of the Divine!
This is the place to tell us what you think, so that we can, as a community, make this book *really* good.
The feedback form is divided into chapters, so you can break down any feedback you might have. There is a section at the end for general feedback. You don't need to have a response for every chapter and you can submit this form multiple times. Here's how you can make your feedback effective:
Feedback Content
Here's some ideas about what we want to know about:
- Typos / mistakes (Did we write 'teh' instead of 'the'? Did we say a creature with 14 Wisdom has a +1 modifier?)
- Hunt balance (Did we get it right (a couple of your party got KO'd, maybe one died, but the hunt was completed? Was it too hard? Too easy? Make sure to include the number of players, their level, which level of hunt you ran, and how many magic items they had.)
- Storyline clarity (Does anything confuse you?)
- Mechanical clarity (Does anything not make sense?)
- Quality of life improvements (How could we make the book/PDF better? Put this bit in the last section of this survey 'General Feedback')
Location
We need to know where in the book you're talking about, this is especially true for typos. To help with this, please tell us: the page number (as it appears on the page), the section (whatever the last title was, e.g. 'Enemies'), and the paragraph (e.g. 'Wave 2'). Imagine you need to explain it to us like we're 5 years old.
Experience vs Conjecture
We've put a lot of thought and calculations into all of this. Saying something "seems strong" is not useful. Saying "I had to reduce the number of enemies from 4 to 2 in wave 2 as two of the party were KO'd already" is much better. Giving context, like "My party of four are all min maxers, and had 3 legendary items each" is even better. If a party that strong was struggling, then we got something horribly wrong!
Language
This is written in British English. We use the word 'armour' etc. But when we're referring to, for example, an animated armor construct, we use the original WotC spelling. Give things a quick google if you think we're using a word wrong but you're not sure.
