Writing Form A
The following is a paragraph written by a student. Assume that you are helping this student to make corrections.
Yesterday was my birthday. we had a party in the park. Five of my friends came and
brought some presents. We had cake and punch and plaid games. Joey, my best freend, won
a prize. I got a baseball, a t-shirt, a radio, a swimsuit, and a cap from the rangers. I can hardly
wait until next year to see if my birthday will be as much fun.