HOTK Part 1 Beta Questions

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These are the beta reading questions to be answered after reading Part 1 of Heir of Two Kingdoms. Please try to answer every question. Do not be afraid to be a little critical. I am looking for feedback to make this book the best it can be. You are not going to hurt my feelings.
*please note Part 1 has not been edited grammatically. There will be numerous typos. The point of beta reading is to hone things on a large scale like plot/character arcs etc.*

First and Last Name *

Email *

Where did you first stop reading the book? Why? *

Who was your favorite character and why? *

Who was your least favorite character and why? *

Did the prologue interest you? Did you enjoy reading from Thaddeus' POV? *

Did you understand the prologue? *

Yes

Sort of

COTDP ended on an emotionally charged cliffhanger. Do you think HOTK starts at a good time shortly after the cliffhanger? Do you think it picks up the story well? *

Yes

Sort of

If you answered "no" on the previous question, why didn't you enjoy how HOTK starts?

When did you feel "Now the story has started?"

How well do you think the relationships between Stephania and her friends and family were done? *

Horrible

Needs work

Well done

Perfect

Steph/Tro

Steph/Dalton

Steph/Aeron/Frawnden

Steph/Jargon

Steph/Lamora/Ravillian

Steph/Artigal

If you want to elaborate on any of the above relationships, please do so.

What was your favorite relationship and why? *

Part One has a lot of action and complex magic rules/action/consequences. How well were you able to follow what was happening and how the Ancient Magic worked? *

Not at all

Mostly

Pretty well

Perfectly

We didn't get to see much of Thaddeus in COTDP. How do you feel about him making some strong appearances in HOTK? *

Was there anything triggering or too dark that you found disturbing? *

Do you think HOTK needs a trigger warning? *

Yes

Is Part 1 satisfying after COTDP's ending? *

Yes

Sort of

How do you feel about Stephania getting her memories back? *

Does it intrigue you to learn about Stephania's parents through memories? *

Yes

Sort of

Was there anything that felt overly predictable or cliché? *

Were there any glaring plot holes? *

Did anything frustrate you while reading? *

How much did you enjoy Part 1? *

Hated it

Obsessed with it

How excited are you for Part 2? *

Don't care

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